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favorite means of transport

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Hi, my name is Ta Thu Giang. Well, to talk about my favorite means of transport I must say it is a motorbike without any doubt. It is important to help me go around when I need it. I always commute to and from school on time by motorbike because my house is far from my school. Besides, sometimes I ride to shop to buy something or get to other destinations around the town to meet my grandparents. I get to travel by motorbike a few months ago with my friends. Not only the traditional Vietnamese vehicle but also to be punctual, affordable. I think a motorbike is very convenient and makes me feel more comfortable than a car or bicycle. It is easy to move during rush hours to find somewhere and useful in many ways so I like to move it.
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a few months ago with my friends. Not
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the traditional Vietnamese vehicle
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me feel more comfortable than a car or bicycle. It is easy to
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during rush hours to find somewhere and useful in
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IELTS letter favorite means of transport

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  American English
1 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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