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You rented a car recently, but we're not satisfied with it, write a letter complaint to the rental agency.

You rented a car recently, but we're not satisfied with it, write a letter complaint to the rental agency. MreO6
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in order to complain with regard to a car that I rented from your agency recently. While, I booked a car to your agency. Given the fact that, I needed to go an crucial appointment in time. Initially, the car's speed was incredibly slowly. When, I was going to my destination with a car that your car was stopped in a half-way. Following this, I knew that this car was broken as well as, his engine was making strange noises. At that time, I was thus angry that I was stayed two days in other places. After that, I cameback my home however, I could not bring your broken car. I think that you can bring your car as well as, repair it. I believe that this situation will not happen again. By the way, could you please deal with this quickly? Yours Faithfully, Eshonqulov Ramazon
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in order to complain with regard to a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
that I rented from your agency recently.
“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
, I booked a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
to your agency.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Given
the fact that, I needed to go
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
an
crucial appointment in time.
Initially
, the car's speed was
incredibly
slowly
.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
, I was going to my destination with a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
that your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stopped
in
Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
a half-way
. Following this, I knew that this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
was broken
as well
as, his engine was making strange noises. At that time, I was
thus
angry that I
was stayed
two days in other places. After that, I
Possible spelling mistake found.
cameback
my home
however
, I could not bring your broken
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that you can bring your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
as well
as, repair it. I believe that this situation will not happen again. By the way, could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
deal with this
quickly
? Yours
Faithfully
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Eshonqulov
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Ramazon
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IELTS letter You rented a car recently, but we're not satisfied with it, write a letter complaint to the rental agency.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
154 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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