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your landlord complaining about the noise in the block of flats which he owns.

your landlord complaining about the noise in the block of flats which he owns. PReyX
Dear Mr. Amandeep, I am writing this letter regarding the amount of noise coming from next door and upper floor apartments which are recently rented out by you. Presently, my apartment number is 2A in the Residential Building and new tenants rented 2B and 3A, which are quietly close to my place. Although I am pleased to obtain accompany of neighbors in order to the security and friendly environment, the residents along with my room always came at midnight, and as a consequence, there is considerable loud music, shouting, and sound of motorbikes continue until about 12: 50 each night. I am sure you will appreciate that this is a worrying situation for us all. I, therefore, would like to suggest you restrict the disturbance after 11 pm. Additionally, I purpose that you must put up a number of signs reminding dwellers to be considerate and to keep their volume to an absolute minimum. In order to disobey these rules, you should put a penalty or a warning letter to deteriorate the inconvenience to other residents. Indeed, that would really make us all grateful. Thank you for your attention to this essential matter. Kind regards, Amandeep
Dear Mr. Amandeep,

I am writing this letter regarding the amount of noise coming from
next
door and upper floor apartments which are recently rented out by you.
Presently
, my apartment number is 2A in the Residential Building and new tenants rented 2B and 3A, which are
quietly
close to my place.

Although I am
pleased
to obtain accompany of neighbors in order to the security and friendly environment, the residents along with my room always came at midnight, and as a consequence, there is considerable loud music, shouting, and sound of motorbikes continue until about 12: 50 each night. I am sure you will appreciate that this is a worrying situation for us all.

I,
therefore
, would like to suggest you restrict the disturbance after 11 pm.
Additionally
, I purpose that you
must
put up a number of signs reminding dwellers to be considerate and to
keep
their volume to an absolute minimum. In order to disobey these
rules
, you should put a penalty or a warning letter to deteriorate the inconvenience to other residents.
Indeed
, that would
really
make
us all grateful.

Thank you for your attention to this essential matter.

Kind regards, Amandeep
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IELTS letter your landlord complaining about the noise in the block of flats which he owns.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
195 words
6.5
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