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To: The whole staff Form: Rachel Lee Subject: Training Programme Details Dear all I am writing to thank you all for your contributions to our conservations about requirements training. Regarding the training program, we decided that the sales training development of confidence in essential abilities such as customer service and sales technique, self-management and organizational leadership, and especially upgrading knowledge the way new IT applications. Please find attached the training programme details that would be done by a) peers b) line manager c) The IT department d) the external companies. The purpose of the training is to support increasing employee performance and sales force activities to better develop the company's products and services. It is effective in roughly 70% of cases and has been successfully applied to a variety of professions and businesses. Should you require any further details, please do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Rachel Rachel Lee Director of Sales
To: The whole staff

Form: Rachel Lee

Subject:
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Training
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Dear all

I am writing to thank you all for your contributions to our
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conservations
about requirements training.

Regarding the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
program, we decided that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
development of confidence in essential abilities such as customer service and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
technique, self-management and organizational leadership, and
especially
upgrading knowledge the way new IT applications.

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Please
find attached the
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training
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programme
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details
that would
be done
by a
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)
peers b
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)
line manager c) The IT department d) the external
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companies
. The purpose of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
training
is to support increasing employee performance and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
force activities to better develop the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
's products and services. It is effective in roughly 70% of cases and has been
successfully
applied to a variety of professions and businesses.

Should you require any
further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
do not hesitate to contact me.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,

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Rachel Rachel
Lee

Director of
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Sales
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IELTS letter Training Programme Details

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  American English
9 paragraphs
161 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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