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I am writing to you with the hope that you will reduce our homework during the Tet holiday.

I am writing to you with the hope that you will reduce our homework during the Tet holiday. PReOj
Dear Mrs. Giang I am writing to you with the hope that you will reduce our homework during the Tet holiday. You have given me 30 exercises on Math and 10 English essays in the upcoming vacation. I know the importance of homework and I've always thought that I will try my best to complete it. However, although we will have 7 days off, we have to spend time helping parents to do the preparations for Tet as well as enjoying Tet with family and friends. Hence, I can't finish this amount of homework for sure. Moreover, we will be given homework for other subjects. So, would you please reduce the amount of homework? I'm extremely sorry if I can't meet your expectations, but I can guarantee that if we have fewer exercises, I and my classmates can finish them. We all wish you have a happy holiday and please consider my request. Yours sincerely
Dear Mrs.
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reduce
our
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homework
during the Tet holiday.

You have
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given
me 30 exercises on Math and 10 English essays in the upcoming vacation. I know the importance of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
homework
and I've always
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thought
that I will try my best to complete it.
However
, although we will have 7 days off, we
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have to
spend time helping parents to do the preparations for Tet
as well
as enjoying Tet with family and friends.
Hence
, I can't finish this amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
homework
for sure.

Moreover
, we will be
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given
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
homework
for other subjects.
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So
, would you
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please
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reduce
the amount of
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homework
? I'm
extremely
sorry if I can't
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meet
your expectations,
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but
I can guarantee that if we have fewer exercises, I and my classmates can finish them.

We all wish you have a happy holiday and
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please
consider my request.

Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter I am writing to you with the hope that you will reduce our homework during the Tet holiday.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
154 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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