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Dear sir. I am sorry to say that I was very disappointed with Samsung telephone J5 Which I recently purchased from your department store, located at Novoiy street. On 22 nd of july I ordered a Samsung J5 and received it 27th of July. When I used the telephone for the first time it worked properly. When I used it second time, it seemed not to work. Furthermore, when Itook a photo, the picture are not taken clearly. In addition, the internet network does not work clearly. I do not open the files, which my friends send. What is more the sence of the telephone does not work completely. It opens after some attempts. When I tried to open it again the same thing happened as I had expected. When I phoned your shop center and explained the matter. Your employer was tactless and refused to satisfy my claim. I am your long time and loyal client. I was always satisfy with the quality of the products in your store. Therefore to solve the proplem peacefully I would appreciated your interest in my problem. I am hoping that you may be able to send me a replacement product or refund it its total price is 100 dollar within a week. Otherwise I will be forced to report this to customer service Assosiation responsible for this matter. I look forward to receiving your satisfactory proposal for settlement of my claim within seven day of the date of this letter. Yours faithfully Feruza
Dear sir.

I am sorry to say that I was
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very
disappointed with Samsung telephone J5 Which I recently
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purchased
from your department store, located at
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Novoiy
street.

On
Did you mean "22nd"?
22 nd
of
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july
I ordered a Samsung J5 and received it 27th of July.

When I
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used
the telephone for the
first
time it worked
properly
. When I
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used
it second time, it seemed not to work.

Furthermore
, when
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Itook
a photo, the picture are not taken
clearly
.

In addition
, the internet network does not work
clearly
. I do not open the files, which my friends
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
.

What is more
the
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sence
of the telephone does not work completely. It opens after
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
attempts.

When I tried to open it again the same thing happened as I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
. When I phoned your shop center and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
the matter. Your employer was tactless and refused to satisfy my claim. I am your long time and loyal client. I was always
Consider using a past participle here: "satisfied".
satisfy
with the quality of the products in your store.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Therefore
to solve the
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proplem
peacefully
I would
The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: "appreciate"
appreciated
your interest in my problem.

I am hoping that you may be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me a replacement product or refund it its total price is 100
Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: "dollars".
dollar
within a week.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Otherwise
I will
be forced
to report this to customer service
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Assosiation
responsible for this matter.

I look forward to receiving your satisfactory proposal for settlement of my claim within seven day of the date of this letter.

Yours
faithfully


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Feruza
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IELTS letter write about a letter which you bought resently

Letter
  American English
11 paragraphs
250 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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