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Write a letter to your friend for accepting his invitation to visit his country.

Write a letter to your friend for accepting his invitation to visit his country. nNG27

Dear Joan, Hoping you are doing well. Last Sunday, I received your letter, I was ready surprised when I find an invitation to visit your country. Firstly I am thankful to you for such a lovely offer. I am very excited to meet you. Moreover I want to intimate you that I would come for a week. Fortunately, there are summer vacations during this visit I would it would be great time to enjoy with you. I will come on 1st August to 2021 and leave for four my country on 8 August 2021. I also confirmed my return tickets. During my stay at your home, I planned, we will go for four date tour in hill station many of my friends have shared their experiences of such a pleasant area as we are meeting after a long period time, it would be good opportunity to spend some time. On the top of it, please let me know. The visiting dates are preferable to you or not. Just informing on call. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. I am impatience to see you. Yours faithfully,

Dear Joan,

Hoping you are doing well. Last Sunday, I received your letter, I was ready surprised when I find an invitation to visit your country. Firstly
 I am thankful to you for such a lovely offer. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 I want to intimate you that I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 for a week. Fortunately
, there are summer vacations during this visit I would it would be great time to enjoy with you. I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 on 1st August to 2021 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 for four my country on 8 August 2021. I also
 confirmed my return tickets.

During my stay at your home, I planned, we will go for four date Possible agreement error. The noun 'tour' seems to be countable, so consider using: "tours".tours
tour
 in hill station This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of my friends have shared their experiences of such a pleasant area as we are meeting after a long period time, it would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 opportunity to spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time. On the top of it, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know. The visiting dates are preferable to you or not. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
 informing on call. Looking forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. I am impatience to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you.

Yours faithfully
, 