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Write a letter to the airport flight managee about missing a business trip due to an accident that happened at the airport.

Write a letter to the airport flight managee about missing a business trip due to an accident that happened at the airport. ENgbq
Dear Madam, On July 30 I had to go to the business trip due some problems I miss the flight. The accident was happened at 9 p. m, I was waiting the flight and flught manager told us we had to go and I went to reception to took my tickets but there is no receptionist and I looked for him and found but he was so slow despite I was hurry and when I checked in I didn't find my luggages. They were stoled by thiefs and I called to airpirt managment and they told me they find my luggages in a week but my all nesessary things are in the my lugagge thats why I missed my business trip and you haven't found my luggages yet. Please make better your servise and find my luggages there was my work computer. I hope you will find my luggage and reapir your servise. Yours faithfully, Alina Granger.
Dear Madam, On July 30 I had to go to the business trip due
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problems I miss the flight. The accident
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at 9 p. m, I was waiting the flight and
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manager
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us we had to go and I went to reception to took my tickets
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but
there is no receptionist and I looked for him and found
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but
he was
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slow despite I was hurry and when I
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in I didn't
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my
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luggages
. They were
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stoled
by
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thiefs
and I called to
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airpirt
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managment and
they
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me they
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my
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in a week
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my all
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nesessary
things are in
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why I missed my business trip and you haven't found my
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luggages
yet
.
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better your
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servise
and
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find
my
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luggages
there was my work computer. I hope you will
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my
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luggage
and
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reapir
your
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servise
. Yours
faithfully
, Alina Granger.

IELTS letter Write a letter to the airport flight managee about missing a business trip due to an accident that happened at the airport.

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157 words
5.0
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