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Write a letter to the airport flight managee about missing a business trip due to an accident that happened at the airport.

Write a letter to the airport flight managee about missing a business trip due to an accident that happened at the airport. ENgbq
Dear Madam, On July 30 I had to go to the business trip due some problems I miss the flight. The accident was happened at 9 p. m, I was waiting the flight and flught manager told us we had to go and I went to reception to took my tickets but there is no receptionist and I looked for him and found but he was so slow despite I was hurry and when I checked in I didn't find my luggages. They were stoled by thiefs and I called to airpirt managment and they told me they find my luggages in a week but my all nesessary things are in the my lugagge thats why I missed my business trip and you haven't found my luggages yet. Please make better your servise and find my luggages there was my work computer. I hope you will find my luggage and reapir your servise. Yours faithfully, Alina Granger.
Dear Madam, On July 30 I had to go to the business trip due
some
problems I miss the flight. The accident
was happened
at 9 p. m, I was waiting the flight and
flught
manager
told
us we had to go and I went to reception to took my tickets
but
there is no receptionist and I looked for him and found
but
he was
so
slow despite I was hurry and when I
checked
in I didn't
find
my
luggages
. They were
stoled
by
thiefs
and I called to
airpirt
managment and
they
told
me they
find
my
luggages
in a week
but
my all
nesessary
things are in
the my lugagge
thats
why I missed my business trip and you haven't found my
luggages
yet
.
Please
make
better your
servise
and
find
my
luggages
there was my work computer. I hope you will
find
my
luggage
and
reapir
your
servise
. Yours
faithfully
, Alina Granger.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the airport flight managee about missing a business trip due to an accident that happened at the airport.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
157 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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