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Letter to friend and thanks for spending holidy

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Dear Ramesh, I want to thank you from core of my heart for inviting me to spend the holiday with you. Undoubtedly, I've had an amazing weekend at your place and I'm sure that you have also had fun during the weekend. I've just reached home today and was scrolling through my stuff and found that I forgot my wallet at your place. Actually, when we were discussing our favorite movie over the coffee table I'd pulled my wallet out and kept it on the table in front of television because my wallet, a hefty one, was hurting my back badly. Later, I completely lost in the movie discussion and forgot to put it back in my pocket. I would request you to look for my wallet on coffee table and send it to my house. As my wallet doesn't contain anything much valuable or any money so you can send it through regular courier service. I'm sure that you know my residence address, but still I've put my address below to make it easy for you. Address: BX1-19/C Krishna Nagar, Batala, Gurdaspur - 143512 Hoping to have another great weekend soon
Dear Ramesh,

I want to thank you from core of my heart for inviting me to spend the holiday with you.

Undoubtedly
, I've had an amazing weekend at your place and I'm sure that you have
also
had fun during the weekend.

I've
just
reached home
today
and was scrolling through my stuff and found that I forgot my
wallet
at your place.

Actually, when we were discussing our favorite movie over the coffee table I'd pulled my
wallet
out and
kept
it on the table in front of television

because
my
wallet
, a hefty one, was hurting my back
badly
. Later, I completely lost in the movie discussion and forgot to put it back in my pocket.

I would request you to look for my
wallet
on coffee table and
send
it to my
house
. As my
wallet
doesn't contain anything much valuable or any money

so
you can
send
it through regular courier service. I'm sure that you know my residence address,
but
still
I've put my address below

to
make
it easy for you.

Address:

BX1-19/C Krishna Nagar,

Batala
,
Gurdaspur
-
143512

Hoping to have another great weekend
soon
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IELTS letter Letter to friend and thanks for spending holidy

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
191 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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