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Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartment.

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Dear Sir, I hear that you are constructing a new office near to my apartment. But I think your decision is kind of bad for nature and your office may damage the enviroment. Not only these I think If you build there your office there always busy with people and children they might interrupt your stuffs and it affect your work. I recuest that you should build your new company corner of the city which has lots of space and calm place. The way I see to solve the problem is to replace it in rural area this make some employment to resident of village. I hope you understand me. Yours faithfully, Alina Granger.
Dear Sir, I hear that you are constructing a new office near to my apartment.
But
I
think
your decision is kind of
bad
for nature and your office may damage the
enviroment
. Not
only
these I
think
If you build there your office there always busy with
people
and children they might interrupt your stuffs and it
affect
your work. I
recuest
that you should build your new
company
corner of the city which has lots of space and calm place. The way I
see
to solve the problem is to replace it in rural area this
make
some
employment to resident of village. I hope you understand me. Yours
faithfully
, Alina Granger.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartment.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
114 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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