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write about a best friend of yours.

write about a best friend of yours. OwANy
Ha lives near my house, so it can be said that she is also my neighbor. Ha is a girl with a tall and thin body and dark skin. She has long, fair hair. So, we often call her the cloud-haired princess. Her eyes are beautiful. It is the big, round, hazel eyes that make her look like a doll. Hà has a small mouth. When she smiles, she looks so cute. Ha like reading books. At the weekend, we often go to the library together. She reads extra books and can understand things quickly  We have one thing in common: we love music. Ha can play the piano and I can sing, so we can perform well at school festivals. Ha is a clever girl. She is good at all subjects at school, especially physics. No physical exercise can make her difficult. . But despite that, she is extremely humble. She helps me and my classmates with studying. Thanks to her help, my studies have improved a lot. It's true that she's bad at sports. Ha is humorous and kind, so she received a lot of love from the people around her. She likes cooking. She often brings me some cookies or cakes that she has made herself, and all of them are delicious. Each morning, Ha and I go to school together. and we have one thing in common: we love music. Ha can play the piano and I can sing, so we can perform well at school festivals. I am proud to have a friend like him, and I think that we are totally suitable for each other.
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my neighbor. Ha is a girl with a tall and thin body and dark skin. She
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long,
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call her the cloud-haired princess. Her eyes are 
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beautiful
. It is the
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, round, hazel eyes that
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her look like a doll.
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mouth. When she smiles, she looks
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cute.

Ha like reading books. At the weekend, we
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often
go to the library together. She reads extra books and can understand things
quickly
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We have one thing in common: we
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love
music. Ha can play the piano and I can sing,
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so
we can perform well at
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school
festivals.

Ha is a clever girl. She is
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good
at all subjects at
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,
especially
physics. No physical exercise can
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her difficult.
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despite that, she is
extremely
humble. She
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helps
me and my classmates with studying. Thanks to her
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, my studies have
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improved
a lot. It's true that she's
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bad
at sports. Ha is humorous and kind,
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she received
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a lot of
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around her. She likes cooking. She
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often
brings me
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some
cookies or cakes that she
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has
made herself, and all of them are delicious.

Each morning, Ha and I go to
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school
together.
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we have one thing in common: we
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love
music. Ha can play the piano and I can sing,
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so
we can perform well at
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school
festivals.

I am proud to have a friend like him, and I
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think
that we are
totally
suitable for each other.
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IELTS letter write about a best friend of yours.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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