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Write a recommendation letter for your friend who is applying for a job. In your letter say:How long do you know him/her?What are the main qualities of your friend?What is his/her work experience?

Write a recommendation letter for your friend who is applying for a job. In your letter say: How long do you know him/her? What are the main qualities of your friend? What is his/her work experience? BJWDa
Dear Mr. White, I am writing to recommend my friend " Jassica Sofi" who has applied for the position of District Sales Manager in our company " The Royal Enfield Motors" . Jassica and I studied together in 'Masters of Business Administration' in the London School of Business and from that time, I know her. She has many qualities such as punctuality, honesty, hard working, creativity to just name a few. In college, she was always eager to take part in all the events and lead them. For her, leadership was positive point as she always lead to others with example. In a sales project in the market of London, she performed exceptionally well and made higher sales. Jassica, owing to her personality, got placement in The BMW as a salesgirl and due to her outstanding performance she was promoted to the sales leader within a year. She has 3 years of work experience in the field of sales. I believe she is competing candidate for the designation of District Sales Manager. I hope you will consider her profile and will give her chance to serve the organization. Yours sincerely, Patrick Smith.
Dear Mr. White,

I am writing to recommend my friend
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Jassica
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; who has applied for the position of District
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Sales
Manager in our
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company
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Jassica
and I studied together in 'Masters of Business Administration' in the London School of Business and from that time, I know her. She has
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many
qualities such as punctuality, honesty,
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hard working
, creativity to
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just
name a few. In college, she was always eager to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in all the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
and lead them. For her, leadership was
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positive
point as she always
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "leads", "leaded", "led".
lead
to others with example. In a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
project in the market of London, she performed
exceptionally
well and made higher sales.

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Jassica
, owing to her personality,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
placement in The BMW as a salesgirl and due to her outstanding performance she
was promoted
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
leader within a year.

She has 3 years of work experience in the field of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sales
. I believe she is competing candidate for the designation of District
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Sales
Manager.

I hope you will consider her profile and will give her chance to serve the organization.

Yours
sincerely
,

Patrick Smith.
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IELTS letter Write a recommendation letter for your friend who is applying for a job. In your letter say: How long do you know him/her? What are the main qualities of your friend? What is his/her work experience?

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  American English
8 paragraphs
192 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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