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Your friend visited you in your country and stayed in a hotel that you have recommended Write a letter to the hotel manager about your friend s unsatisfactory stay In you letter 1 Tell about your friend 2 Describe the problem 3 Suggest some improvement

Your friend visited you in your country and stayed in a hotel that you have recommended Write a letter to the hotel manager about your friend s unsatisfactory stay In you letter 1 Tell about your friend 2 Describe the problem 3 Suggest some improvement 7apE3
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing with regards to the issue during the stay of my close friend at your hotel and I would also suggest possible solution. Let me introduce my friend at first. he is civil engineer, age 28 years from Pakistan with identification number 35202-56789432-1, and stayed in one of your hotel's room. I have recommended him to stay in your hotel, as I have explained him plus points during my stay two years back. he stayed for four days in room number 34 at the ground floor. In relation to the issues during his stay, Although it's affordable and near to my house, there was a delay for allotment of the room. Furthermore, his room was not tidy up and room's shower was out of order. Third downside of the hotel was the poor condition of the carpet. Apart from that the cutlery provided was not clean properly. As a solution, I would recommend to replace your carpets and cutlery as it had been stained and stinks. Proper attention is required for the shower cabin and it must be replaced too. I hope you would definitely pay attention to the said issues, in order to provide best service to the customers. Otherwise, hotel and tourism industry is one of the leading business across the world. there will be a time when you wouldn't have enough customers, I am afraid. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
with regards to
the issue during the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stay
of my close friend at your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
and I would
also
suggest possible solution.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me introduce my friend at
first
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
he
is civil engineer, age 28 years from Pakistan with identification number 35202-56789432-1, and stayed in one of your hotel's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
. I have recommended him to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stay
in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
, as I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
him plus points during my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stay
two years back.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
he
stayed for four days in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
number 34 at the
This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?
ground floor
.

In relation to the issues during his
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stay
, Although it's affordable and near to my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
, there was a delay for allotment of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
.
Furthermore
, his
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
was not tidy up and room's shower was out of order. Third downside of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
was the poor condition of the carpet. Apart from that the cutlery provided was not clean
properly
.

As a solution, I would
The verb 'recommend' is used with the gerund form: "recommend replacing".
recommend to replace
your carpets and cutlery as it had
been stained
and stinks. Proper attention
is required
for the shower cabin and it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be replaced
too.

I hope you would definitely pay attention to the said issues, in order to
A determiner is probably missing here: "provide the best".
provide best
service to the customers.
Otherwise
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
and tourism industry is one of the leading business across the world.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
there
will be a time when you wouldn't have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
customers, I am afraid.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter Your friend visited you in your country and stayed in a hotel that you have recommended Write a letter to the hotel manager about your friend s unsatisfactory stay In you letter 1 Tell about your friend 2 Describe the problem 3 Suggest some improvement

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  American English
7 paragraphs
234 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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