Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

A builder has recently completed some renovation at your house but you are not satisfied with his work Write a letter to him In your letter Tell him what work has not been completed properly Tell him what you want him to do Suggest some times when you wil

A builder has recently completed some renovation at your house but you are not satisfied with his work Write a letter to him In your letter Tell him what work has not been completed properly Tell him what you want him to do Suggest some times when you wil g58KA
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my sheer dissatisfaction with the renovation work performed by your team in my house. As per our signed contract, you were supposed to whitewash and paint all the walls of my house. Unfortunately, you failed to accomplish your commitment. Yesterday I checked that the paint of my bedroom wall started peeling off due to dampening. As it is just three days since you completed your work, I request you to visit my house again and repaint these damaged walls. Moreover, you are already paid for these services, so I am not liable to pay any other amount. Due to some official work, I will be travelling to New Delhi this week. I would appreciate it if could come next week for fixing all the said issues. Please call me at +9155848447757575 if you have any doubt regarding my complaint. I am hoping to hear a positive response from your end. Yours sincerely, John Smith
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my sheer dissatisfaction with the renovation work performed by your team in my
house
.

As per our signed contract, you
were supposed
to whitewash and paint all the walls of my
house
. Unfortunately, you failed to accomplish your commitment. Yesterday I
checked
that the paint of my bedroom wall
started
peeling off due to dampening.

As it is
just
three days since you completed your work, I request you to visit my
house
again and repaint these damaged walls.
Moreover
, you are already paid for these services,
so
I am not liable to pay any other amount.

Due to
some
official work, I will be travelling to New Delhi this week. I would appreciate it if could
come
next
week for fixing all the said issues.
Please
call me at +9155848447757575 if you have any doubt regarding my complaint.

I am hoping to hear a
positive
response from your
end
.

Yours
sincerely
,

John Smith
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter A builder has recently completed some renovation at your house but you are not satisfied with his work Write a letter to him In your letter Tell him what work has not been completed properly Tell him what you want him to do Suggest some times when you wil

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
162 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic: