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You will be graduating from university You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony Write a letter of invitation to your parents In the letter Explain that you have completed your studies Give details of the

You will be graduating from university You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony Write a letter of invitation to your parents In the letter Explain that you have completed your studies Give details of the 2bPEx
Dear Nina, I am just writing to talk to you about my graduation ceremony for the MBA course in I have been undertaking for the last two years. As you know, I have been part of the two year masters of business administration diploma course at the Duke university in Singapore. This batch started last year in May and will end in April of this year. Although my final exams are going to end on 31st May, the course will officially end 20 days prior to these tests. The college have given us a break for two weeks after the last examination and the graduation ceremony will, therefore, be held on 15 th April which is a Friday in the ballroom of The Richmond Hotel. This function will start at 6. 00 pm but the guests have to reach the venue earlier to find their designated seats. There is a strict dress code of black tie for students, however, the guests are allowed to be in semi-formal attire. The event will include dinner and non-alcoholic beverages and will conclude by 10. 00 pm. I have been allocated two couple passes to invite my guests for this function and I would like mum and dad to join Matt and you for this event. These tickets are chargeable, so please speak to them and let me know if they can make it to Singaopore. I can’t wait to hear from you with your travel dates and flight ticket details. Warm wishes, Karry
Dear Nina,

I am
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writing to talk to you about my graduation ceremony for the MBA course in I have been

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undertaking
for the last two years.

As you know, I have been part of the
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two year
masters of business administration diploma course at the

Duke university in Singapore. This batch
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started
last year in May and will
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end
in April of this year.

Although my final exams are going to
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end
on 31st May, the course will
officially
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end
20 days prior to

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these
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tests
.

The college have
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given
us a break for two weeks after the last examination and the graduation

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ceremony
will,
therefore
,
be held
on
Did you mean "15th"?
15 th
April which is a Friday in the ballroom of The Richmond Hotel.

This function will
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start
at 6. 00 pm
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but
the guests
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have to
reach the venue earlier to find their designated

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seats
. There is a strict dress code of black tie for students,
however
, the guests are
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allowed
to be
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in


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semi-formal
attire. The
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event
will include dinner and non-alcoholic beverages and will conclude by 10. 00

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pm
.

I have
been allocated
two couple passes to invite my guests for this function and I would like mum and

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dad
to
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join
Matt and you for this
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event
. These tickets are chargeable,
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so
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please
speak to them and
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let


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me
know if they can
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make
it to
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Singaopore
.

I can’t wait to hear from you with your travel dates and flight ticket
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details
.

Warm wishes,

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Karry

IELTS letter You will be graduating from university You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony Write a letter of invitation to your parents In the letter Explain that you have completed your studies Give details of the

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