Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Your best friend just had her first baby. You are currently overseas but will be returning to your hometown in a week.Write to your friend. In your lettercongratulate your friendtell her when you will be returning homeask when you could drop in to meet he

Your best friend just had her first baby. You are currently overseas but will be returning to your hometown in a week. Write to your friend. In your lettercongratulate your friendtell her when you will be returning homeask when you could drop in to meet he kYjmM

Dear Sara, I am truly delighted by the news! Nothing is more refreshing than bringing hope to this world and newborns are the symbol of hopes. Please accept my deepest congratulations for your newborn child. I wish the baby the best of the best. As you know, unfortunately I am right now on a business trip. Had I known your baby is going to be born one week early, I would not have volunteered for the mission. Anyway, no one could have predicted the exact time of birth. Hopefully, we can finalize the deal by tomorrow and our new customer will sign the contract by the end of the week. I am going to postpone all the sightseeing I had planned before and fly back home as soon as I am finished here. Hence, I will be home next week. Since I will be back after the weekend, I was wondering whether it is okay if I come by your house after work. Babies are my soft spot and I want to see the tiny miracle of yours as soon as possible. Please let me know if Tuesday evening is convenient for you too. Looking forward to seeing you Behnaz Yousefi

Dear Sara,

I am truly
 delighted by the news! Nothing is more refreshing than bringing hope to this world and newborns are the symbol of hopes. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 accept my deepest congratulations The correct preposition here is "on".on
for
 your newborn child. I wish the baby the best of the best.

As you know, unfortunately I am right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 on a business trip. Had I known your baby is going to be born
 one week early, I would not have volunteered for the mission. Anyway, no one could have predicted the exact time of birth. Hopefully
, we can finalize the deal by tomorrow and our new customer will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :indication
sign
 the contract by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the week. I am going to postpone all the sightseeing I had planned This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and fly
 back home as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as I am finished
 here. Hence
, I will be home next
 week.

Since I will be back after the weekend, I was wondering whether it is okay if I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 by your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 after work. Babies are my soft spot and I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the tiny miracle of yours as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if Tuesday evening is convenient for you too.

Looking forward to seeing you

Possible spelling mistake found.BenzBehanBeheadBernat
Behnaz
Possible spelling mistake found.Yousef
Yousefi