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Write a paragraph of introduction to yourself

Write a paragraph of introduction to yourself 86Lrm
Hi, first of all, let me introduce myself. My name is Viet Anh, I'm 18 years old. Now, I'm a freshman student at FPT University. My major is information technology. I come from Ha Giang province, which is the northernmost point of Vietnam. My family is a nuclear family consisting of my parents, one older sibling and me. We get on well with each other and have interested in common. My family is the most important thing in my life. My hobbies are watching movies, playing sports like basketball.
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IELTS letter Write a paragraph of introduction to yourself

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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