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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request some days off to participate in a training course related to my current duties in the company. Nowadays, it’s essential for any digital marketer to be completely updated with new tools to ensure all the procedures are functioning in the marketing team. Recently, Google announced a new software called Big Query that I believe can be useful for optimizing different stuff. Hubspot is going to run a practical, skill oriented course about Big Query that helps the attendees achieve advanced proficiency. It contains some classes to teach the basics and a project to be implemented by the tool. The course is going to be held from September 20th to September 22th in London, therefore I am asking to be off from September 19th to September 23th, considering two days for travelling there. I would appreciate my request to be noted and I hope this course helps the whole corporation. Yours faithfully, Amir
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request
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some
days off to participate in a training
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course
related to my
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duties in the
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company
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Nowadays, it’s essential for any digital marketer to be completely updated with new tools to ensure all the procedures are functioning in the marketing team. Recently, Google announced a new software called
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Big
Query that I believe can be useful for optimizing
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different
stuff.

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Hubspot
is going to run a practical,
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skill
oriented
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course
about
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Big
Query that
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helps
the attendees achieve advanced proficiency. It contains
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some
classes to teach the basics and a project to
be implemented
by the tool.

The
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course
is going to
be held
from September 20th to September
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22th
in London,
therefore
I am asking to be off from September 19th to September
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23th
, considering two days for travelling there.

I would appreciate my request to
be noted
and I hope this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
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helps
the whole corporation.

Yours
faithfully
,

Amir

IELTS letter asking for some days off for training course

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160 words
6.0
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