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letter about camping holiday

letter about camping holiday xaa2g

Dear Sara, I haven’t spoken with you for a long time so I am very excited to speak with you. As you mentioned in your letter you are preparing yourself for camping holiday which very wonderful and exciting. I know that you are very busy this days and having a holiday would be excellent idea for rest and recharging for the rest of the year. In this camping you can taste many local and delicious food or you can speak with new people with different culture which is very fabulous and interesting. On the other hand having camping on summer has some disadvantages. First of all If you do not like your skin to be tanned or darkened, you shouldn’t travel in this time of year. You should know that many people travel and camp in summer so it would be a little crowded. by the way I was deciding to have camping this summer and I would be very pleased to have camping with you. Hope to meet you soon Your friend

Dear Sara,

I haven’t spoken with you for a long time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited to speak with you. As you mentioned in your letter you are preparing yourself for camping holiday which This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 wonderful and exciting.

I know that you are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 busy It seems that a possessive apostrophe is missing.this day'sthese days
this days
 and having a holiday would be excellent This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 for rest and recharging for the rest of the year. In this camping you can taste This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 local and delicious food or you can speak with new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 culture which is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 fabulous and interesting.

On the other hand
 having camping on summer has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 disadvantages. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
 If you do not like your skin to be tanned
 or darkened, you shouldn’t travel in this time of year. You should know that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 travel and camp in summer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it would be a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 crowded. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBy
by
 the way I was deciding to have camping this summer and I would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 to have camping with you.

Hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon


Your friend