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Letter to find a part time employment in next summer

Letter to find a part time employment in next summer AJJ8n

Dear Mrs Berrett, I'm interested regarding to your advertisement on caretaker part time basis for your home for a few days in next summer. I have hand full of experience in cleaning, operating kitchen equipment, cooking and gardening which I have gathered from my previous workplaces, will allow me to support your requirements perfectly. I am honestly looking forward to buy a drawing pad to aid my university course works in next year and that is the reason why I'm looking for a part time job at your place. Since a branded drawing pad could be very expensive, I’m planning on buying a used one. I'm interested to work at your place and I'm currently holding a valid working visa. I'm available for work after 3. 00pm every day except Sundays. So, I'm looking forward to hearing from you regarding the above matter and feel free to contact me at any time via telephone 0777900918. Thank You. Sincerely, Nathasha.

Dear Mrs Possible spelling mistake found.Barrett
Berrett
,

I'm interested The phrase 'regarding to' is not correct. Use "regarding" or "regard to".regardingregard to
regarding to
 your advertisement on caretaker This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 basis for your home for a few days in next
 summer. I have hand full of experience in cleaning, operating kitchen equipment, cooking and gardening which I have gathered from my previous workplaces, will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to support your requirements perfectly
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am honestly
 looking forward to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a drawing pad to aid my university course works in next
 year and that is
 the reason why I'm looking for a This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 job at your place. Since a branded drawing pad could be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 expensive, I’m planning on buying a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 one.

I'm interested to work at your place and I'm currently
 holding a valid working visa. I'm available for work after 3. 00pm every day except Sundays.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I'm looking forward to hearing from you regarding the above matter and feel free to contact me at any time via telephone 0777900918.

Thank You.

Sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Natasha
Nathasha
. 