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write a letter to editor regarding street light problems in your area.

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H1BC Flat Rajdhani Market New Delhi 25TH May 2021 The Editor The Hindu New Delhi Subject: street light problems Dear sir/madam, Through the esteemed column of your Newspaper, The Hindu, I want to stress regarding the street light problems in our locality. We are facing many problems in our area due to unavailable street lights as well as available street lights are not in well condition. On account of this, many accidents have been occurred such as – road accidents, Dacoit, robbery, gang rape, etc. that create fear in mind among the citizens as they do not want to go out after covering darkness. Thus, I have written a letter to municipal authority but they didn’t respond, therefore, I wrote you to publish an article as the concerned authority would be woken up. I would highly appreciate you in advance to taking such steps regarding our problems. Yours sincerely Tanvi Roy
H1BC Flat

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Rajdhani
Market

New Delhi

25TH May 2021

The Editor

The Hindu

New Delhi

Subject:
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street
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light
problems

Dear sir/madam,

Through the esteemed column of your Newspaper, The Hindu, I want to
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stress
regarding the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
street
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
light
problems in our locality.

We are facing
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many
problems in our area due to unavailable
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street
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lights
as well
as available
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street
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lights
are not in well condition. On account of this,
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many
accidents have
been occurred
such as
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–
road accidents,
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Dacoit
, robbery, gang rape, etc. that create fear in mind among the citizens as they do not want to go out after covering darkness.

Thus
, I have written a letter to municipal authority
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but
they didn’t respond,
therefore
, I wrote you to publish an article as the concerned authority would
be woken
up. I would
highly
appreciate you in advance to taking such steps regarding our problems.

Yours
sincerely


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Tanvi
Roy
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