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Dear Hiring Manager, My name's Thanh Thao. I am writing to apply for the Medical Representative which was advertised on the servier.vn website.

Dear Hiring Manager, My name's Thanh Thao. I am writing to apply for the Medical Representative which was advertised on the servier. vn website. eEE0A
Dear Hiring Manager, My name's Thanh Thao. I am writing to apply for the Medical Representative which was advertised on the servier. vn website. I completed my Bachelor degree with a pharmacy administration at the Faculty of Pharmacy - University of Medicine and Pharmacy at Ho Chi Minh City and I am waiting to receive a degree. After graduation, I have a desire to work in a pharmaceutical company with a professional environment, where I can both contribute and develop myself. You will find me to be a high responsibility, keen to learn and contribute person. Given the opportunity, I would apply myself with enthusiasm to all tasks, ensuring that I get the job done efficiently. I am confident with my capacity, qualifications and skills that I can respond to the requirements for your recruiting position company. I hope I can become an experienced employee and bring more values to the company. As part of my application, I have attached my resume for your consideration. I look forward to meeting with you and discussing my qualifications in more detail. Yours sincerely, Nguyen Thanh Thao
Dear Hiring Manager,

My name's Thanh
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Thao
. I am writing to apply for the Medical Representative which
was advertised
on the
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servier
.
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vn
website.

I completed my Bachelor degree with a pharmacy administration at the Faculty of Pharmacy
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-
University of Medicine and Pharmacy at Ho Chi Minh
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City and
I am waiting to receive a degree. After graduation, I have a desire to work in a pharmaceutical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
with a professional environment, where I can both contribute and develop myself.

You will find me to be a high responsibility, keen to learn and contribute person.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Given
the opportunity, I would apply myself with enthusiasm to all tasks, ensuring that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the job done
efficiently
. I am confident with my capacity, qualifications and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
that I can respond to the requirements for your recruiting position
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. I hope I can become an experienced employee and bring more values to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

As part of my application, I have attached my resume for your consideration. I look forward to meeting with you and discussing my qualifications in more detail.

Yours
sincerely
, Nguyen Thanh
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Thao
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IELTS letter Dear Hiring Manager, My name's Thanh Thao. I am writing to apply for the Medical Representative which was advertised on the servier. vn website.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
183 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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