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Alice's morning routine through Saturdays is it good or need some more breakfast

Alice's morning routine through Saturdays is it good or need some more breakfast Aw99n

There it was my mum's note. I took the note in my hands and started reading. I will be home late don't wait for me: ) Strange but I didn't care less as I knew she was out making money in her way. I went to make breakfast myself as it was Saturday morning. I took olives, bread, tomatoes and made a sandwich. I was eating when someone knocked the door. I heard a <HEYY ARE YOU AWAKE WE HAVE A PICNIC! ! >. Oh that's Annabel my friend I stood from my chair and went to the door. I opened the door finding Annabel with a wide smile on her face. Oh that's must be challenging she's full of energy.

There it was my mum's note.

I took the note in my hands and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 reading.

I will be home late don't wait for me:Don't put a space before the closing parenthesis)
 )


Strange This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I didn't care less Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.than
as
 I knew she was out making money in her way.

I went to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 breakfast myself as it was Saturday morning.

I took olives, bread, tomatoes and made a sandwich.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was eating when someone knocked the door.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 heard a <Possible spelling mistake found.HeyHEY Y
HEYY
 ARE YOU AWAKE WE HAVE A PICNIC! ! >.

Interjections are usually punctuated.Oh,Oh!Oh?Oh.
Oh
 that's Annabel my friend I stood from my chair and went to the door.

I opened the door finding Annabel with a wide smile on her face.

Interjections are usually punctuated.Oh,Oh!Oh?Oh.
Oh
 that's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be challenging she's full of energy. 