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Write a letter of complaint to a store where you purchased a faulty product.

Write a letter of complaint to a store where you purchased a faulty product. 8dWRx

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about a fault with the new Canon PowerShot G7 X Mark II Digital Camera that I purchased from the Film Camera Store in Nottingham on 24th October. I was pretty proud that this camera has been considered the best model recently but disappointed to find that it did not work as expected. It malfunctioned just after I took it home. I cannot take pictures as well as shoot films, and it sometimes turns off automatically. When I first learned of this problem, I turned back to the store the next day to require the shop assistant to replace it with a similar one. Unfortunately, there were none in stock, therefore, she said that it would take a few days for me to get the new camera and assured me that your store would phone me within a week at the latest; however, I still have not received any calls from you. I would appreciate your service if you could please rectify the matter at once and send me either a replacement or full fund within the next three business days. I hope we can sort this matter out amicably. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Lucy Smith

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about a fault with the new Canon Possible spelling mistake found.PowerS hot
PowerShot
 G7 X Mark II Digital You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
Camera
 that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 from the Film You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
Camera
 Store in Nottingham on 24th October.

I was pretty proud that this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 has been considered
 the best model recently This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 disappointed to find that it did not work as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
. It malfunctioned This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 after I took it home. I cannot take pictures as well
 as shoot films, and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 turns off automatically
.

When I first
 learned of this problem, I turned back to the store the next
 day to require the shop assistant to replace it with a similar one. Unfortunately, there were none in stock, therefore
, she said that it would take a few days for me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 and assured me that your store would phone me within a week at the latest; however
, I still
 have not received any calls from you.

I would appreciate your service if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 rectify the matter at once and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me either a replacement or full fund within the next
 three business days. I hope we can sort this matter out amicably
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
,

Lucy Smith