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Letter to addmission office regarding waiver for English entry requirements

Letter to addmission office regarding waiver for English entry requirements wONwl

Respected personnel, I am Sumit Budhiraja, current applicant for Master of Mechanical Engineering course. I have recieved a conditional offer letter from your esteemed university for the particular course. Being a mechanical engineer graduate, I would like to pursue my career in the same field without any restrictions for particular specialization. Hence I chose to go with Master of Mechanical Engineering and university like University of Melbourne can provide me the unexpected boost in the same field but due to the condition over the offer letter regarding English language, I am not able to confirm my enrollment for the course. I have completed my undergraduate, in 2020 with 84. 5%, from english taught(medium of teaching was in english language) university (Amity University, Noida) and my schooling was too from english taught (medium of teaching was in english language) with good score in both English as subject and complete coursera. As I gone through the website, I found that if a student have completed the degree within two years of the commencement to study at the University of Melbourne, no additional evidence of English language proficiency is required. Therefore, I would like to request you to please provide me the waiver for English language condition on my offer letter so that I can pursue my studies and passion futher in such an esteemed university like University of Melbourne with good and job oriented course structure. Regards Sumit Budhiraja

Respected personnel,

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