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Write a letter ,you recently went to visit a friend new home

Write a letter, you recently went to visit a friend new home 5bxnp
Dear Smith, . I am doing well. Hope you and you family are in radiant health and spirit. I am feel very proudly, when you invited me in your new house. Now that, I came back my house and realise that your newly constructed bunglow marvelious. First of all the sorrunding of your residence is rich developed and the view on top is amazing. Moreover, the living area is fabulous or the panting hanged on wall is heart touching. The kitchen and washroom is designed by new ways. Although, the front yard is small, but the varity of flowers planted by your father looks charming. In addition, I enjoyed the food served by you really mouthwatering. I remember the homemade pizza, I ever ate. Beside, the night walk with you and Jack, I never forgot. Next month we have a longed weekend consequently, I plan our catch up at my apartment this time. I am inviting jack as well. It will be great time again. In the last, once again congratulations and I looking forward to seeing you. With Regards, Nina.
Dear Smith
, .
I am doing well. Hope you and
you family
are in radiant health and spirit. I am feel
very
proudly
, when you invited me in your new
house
.
Now
that, I came back my
house
and
realise
that your
newly
constructed
bunglow
marvelious
.
First of all
the
sorrunding
of your residence is rich developed and the view on top is amazing.
Moreover
, the living area is fabulous or the panting hanged on wall is heart touching. The kitchen and washroom
is designed
by new ways. Although, the front yard is
small
,
but
the
varity
of flowers planted by your father looks charming.
In addition
, I enjoyed the food served by you
really
mouthwatering. I remember the homemade pizza, I ever ate. Beside, the night walk with you and Jack, I never forgot.
Next
month we have a longed weekend
consequently
, I plan our catch up at my apartment this time. I am inviting jack
as well
. It will be great time again. In the last, once again congratulations and
I looking
forward to seeing you. With Regards, Nina.
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IELTS letter Write a letter, you recently went to visit a friend new home

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
181 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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