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Letter writing to enquire about lost bag on airplane

Letter writing to enquire about lost bag on airplane R2Abp
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to enquire about my lost bag during my journey to London. I missed my bag on the airplane itself. Would like to know what I should do to attain it back. The flight I took was Emrites scheduled time was 4pm at London. On the aircraft I left my handy yellow bag. I have a sweater, my diary, a small jwellery box with one of my gold pair of earrings and make-up kit inside. Also I have my wallet which contains some of my ID and some money. The bag it is written PUMA on the left hand side and also a golden chain at the front. I would like to regain the bag as I have stuffs which are necessary for me. Could you please help me to the concerned person to whom I should report for the missing bag. Expecting to hear from you soon. Thanking You, Teena. Poulose.
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to
enquire
about my lost
bag
during my journey to London. I missed my
bag
on the airplane itself. Would like to know what I should do to attain it back. The flight I took was
Emrites
scheduled time was 4pm at London. On the aircraft I
left
my handy yellow
bag
. I have a sweater, my diary, a
small
jwellery
box with one of my gold pair of earrings and
make
-up kit inside.
Also
I have my wallet which contains
some
of my ID and
some
money. The
bag
it
is written
PUMA on the
left hand
side and
also
a golden chain at the front. I would like to regain the
bag
as I have stuffs which are necessary for me. Could you
please
help
me to the concerned person to whom I should report for the missing
bag
. Expecting to hear from you
soon
. Thanking You,
Teena
.
Poulose
.
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IELTS letter Letter writing to enquire about lost bag on airplane

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
160 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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