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You want to spend a two week holiday in your friend's region.

You want to spend a two week holiday in your friend's region. aApLw

Dear Jake, I am writing to ask for advice about your region where I have decided to spend my two~ week holiday. It is so good seeing and talking with you much time after such a long time. I am very excited and I will not miss the oppotunity to meet you during that time. I have heard about this wonderful place before, therefore, I keen to be there. First of all, I must be learning about hotels and renting taxis which would be helpful for me. Where could I stay and how to get to there. Then, it would also be important for me to know renting hotels room. So, I prefer to book the room in a nice hostel for backelor people where the cost is reasonable. As such, I like the accomidation arrangiment and the surrounding view. Mostof essential to me is to be aware of weather in your region. What clothes and things could I take? It would be a great help to me, if you write me as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Mina Ray.

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ask for
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two~
 week holiday.

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meet
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First of all
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must
 be learning about hotels and renting taxis which would be helpful for me. Where could I stay and how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to there. Then, it would also
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important
 for me to know renting hotels room. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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backelor
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people
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accomidation
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arrangiment
 and the surrounding view.

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Mostof
 essential to me is to be aware of weather in your region. What clothes and things could I take?

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help
 to me, if you write me as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Yours sincerely
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Mina
 Ray. 