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You need to attend a family event. Your child will be missing school for a day. Write a letter to the school principal and say • What is the event? • Why is it important for your child to be there? • How will your child make up for missed lessons?

You need to attend a family event. Your child will be missing school for a day. Write a letter to the school principal and say • What is the event? • Why is it important for your child to be there? • How will your child make up for missed lessons? PWAwK
Dear Sir/Madam This letter has been written to seek your assistance for a leave of my child studying in 4th grade. On 5th August, there will be a family function at our home. It is Ria's grandparent's 50th wedding anniversary. So on this golden jubilee occasion, the grand party will be organized at Mehsana Resort for a full day. So all the family members will leave Ahmedabad on the 5th morning and return at late night. Though it is working day and Ria has a school for that day, nobody from the home will be able to drop and pick her for school. Moreover, she is also excited about this party and she will be going to perform a surprise dance and a drama for her grandparents. She is so much attached to them, so she is eagerly waiting for this day. I will make sure that, whatever the lessons will teach in school, I will try my best to cover by her. She will borrow her friend Shama's book and make a copy from it and whatever be the task of that day, she will do it by the next day. For the same, if she needs any assistance, I will be there for her help. Thank you for giving the matter to your attention. Regards, Rahi Desai
Dear Sir/Madam

This letter has
been written
to seek your assistance for a
leave
of my child studying in 4th grade.

On 5th August, there will be a family function at our home. It is
Ria
's grandparent's 50th wedding anniversary.
So
on this golden jubilee occasion, the grand party will
be organized
at
Mehsana
Resort for a full day.
So
all the family members will
leave
Ahmedabad on the 5th morning and return at late night. Though it is working day and
Ria
has a school for that day, nobody from the home will be able to drop and pick her for school.
Moreover
, she is
also
excited about this
party and
she will be going to perform a surprise dance and a drama for her grandparents. She is
so
much attached to them,
so
she is
eagerly
waiting for this day.

I will
make
sure that, whatever the lessons will teach in school, I will try my best to cover by her. She will borrow her friend
Shama
's book and
make
a copy from it and whatever be the task of that day, she will do it by the
next
day. For the same, if she needs any assistance, I will be there for her
help
.

Thank you for giving the matter to your attention.

Regards,

Rahi
Desai
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IELTS letter You need to attend a family event. Your child will be missing school for a day. Write a letter to the school principal and say • What is the event? • Why is it important for your child to be there? • How will your child make up for missed lessons?

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  American English
6 paragraphs
218 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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