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Give some information about overseas universities

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inquire about some information about overseas university. I am one of the student who have been accepted to study at University you n your country. As an alien person living and studying abroad seem a little be anxious for me. According this reason I would be grateful if you could give further information which I interested in. I wonder to know about overseas studentsl lifestyle and their views. Also would it be possible for you to tell about any relevant social clubs I might be able to join. As I mention when I go to your country it would be useful for me to learn citizens culture by participating those clubs. It is the best way to solve how to behave an unfamiliar environment. I would appreciate it if you could inform me as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Nozima Imomova
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inquire about
some
information about overseas university. I am one of the student who have been
accepted
to study at University you n your country. As an alien person living and studying abroad seem a
little
be anxious for me.
According this
reason I would be grateful if you could give
further
information which I interested in. I wonder to know about overseas
studentsl
lifestyle and their views.
Also
would it be possible for you to
tell
about any relevant social clubs I might be able to
join
. As I mention when I go to your country it would be useful for me to learn citizens culture by participating those clubs. It is the best way to solve how to behave an unfamiliar environment. I would appreciate it if you could inform me as
soon
as possible. Yours
sincerely
,
Nozima
Imomova
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IELTS letter Give some information about overseas universities

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  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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