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Volunteer Programs& Projects

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Dear, When I saw your organization’s banner, I was really impressed. I interested in becoming volunteer for the X foundation. Volunteering can make a real difference to your own life and the lives of those around you. Volunteer programs or projects help to improve many people’s life. I would very much like to participate in your charity by volunteering my time and talents. Thank you for your consideration in this manner. I look forward to hearing from you soon, and to becoming an active volunteer with X foundation. Best Regards.
Dear,

When I
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saw
your organization’s banner, I was
really
impressed. I interested in becoming volunteer for the X foundation. Volunteering can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a real difference to your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
life and the
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lives
of those around you. Volunteer programs or projects
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help
to
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improve
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many
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people
’s life. I would
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very
much like to participate in your charity by volunteering my time and talents.

Thank you for your consideration in this manner. I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
, and to becoming an active volunteer with X foundation.

Best Regards.
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IELTS letter Volunteer Programs& Projects

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  American English
4 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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