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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write a letter to your Team Leader that you wouldn’t be attending a product presentation as it is your best friend’s wedding. Write at least 150 words.

Write a letter to your Team Leader that you wouldn’t be attending a product presentation as it is your best friend’s wedding. mngK
Dear Mr Choi, I am writing to request not to attend the product presentation which is going to be held next Friday night. It should be a memorable moment for the whole team to exhibit the product which we have been established for a whole year, and it was accomplished ultimately. I am happy to share this joy with my colleagues originally. Nevertheless, there is a wedding ceremony going to be held on that particular night. The ceremony is held by my best friend, and I am the best man. Consequently, it forced me to be presented in the ceremony. Due to the above reason, I sincerely wish you will accept my absence in the presentation. Furthermore, I am going to delegate my demonstration to Chris Wong, who understands the product most except me. I hope I will receive a positive response from you, and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, John Doe
Dear Mr
Choi
,

I am writing to request not to attend the product presentation which is going to
be held
next
Friday night.

It should be a memorable moment for the whole team to exhibit the product which we have
been established
for a whole year, and it
was accomplished
ultimately
. I am happy to share this joy with my colleagues
originally
.

Nevertheless
, there is a wedding ceremony going to
be held
on that particular night. The ceremony
is held
by my best friend, and I am the best
man
.
Consequently
, it forced me to
be presented
in the ceremony.

Due to the above reason, I
sincerely
wish you will accept my absence in the presentation.
Furthermore
, I am going to delegate my demonstration to Chris Wong, who understands the product most except me.

I hope I will receive a
positive
response from you, and I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

John Doe
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your Team Leader that you wouldn’t be attending a product presentation as it is your best friend’s wedding.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
157 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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