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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you VGN7

Dear David, How are you doing? I am really happy and excited after receiving the photos of our recent trip to Europe. You know, from very long period I'm planning a trip to Europe but I could not make it because of many unforseen circumstances. Then I got a letter Informing me to join you for the Europe excursion for two weeks. I was really excited at that moment and it got doubled when I reached Europe. The beauty of the place is beyond my imagination vand it was great to see European architecture, Iceland and the landscape. The photos were extremely beautiful and it's really difficult to describe my feelings with words. The journey was a dream come true moment for me and I will maintain and album with this photos and I'm much thankful for you for making it happen. By the way, I'm so sorry for not responding immediately after the visit. Since I took a long leave from office, I had a lot of pending work at the office and I had back to back submissions. I already told you about the monsoon in Pune and how beautiful to go for a trek during those days. So it would be geat if you could come and stay with me during the coming rainy season in my place. I'm sorry for the delay in talking to you. Waiting eagerly for you! With Regards, Roy

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