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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you er6V
Dear David, How are you doing? I am really happy and excited after receiving the photos of our recent trip to Europe. You know, from extremely long period I'm planning a trip to Europe on the contrary I could not make it due to the fact of numerous unforeseen circumstances. Then I got a letter Informing me to join you for the Europe excursion for two weeks. I was really excited at that moment and it got doubled when I reached Europe. The beauty of the place is beyond my imagination and it was great to see European architecture, Iceland and the landscape. The photos were extremely beautiful and it's really difficult to describe my feelings with words. The journey was a dream come true moment for me and I will maintain and album with these photos and I'm much thankful for you for making it happen. By the way, I'm consequently sorry for not responding immediately after the visit. Since I took a long leave from office, I had numerous pending work at the office and I had back to back submissions. I already told you about the monsoon in Pune and how beautiful to go for a trek during those days. Consequently it would be great if you could come and stay with me during the coming rainy season in my place. I'm sorry for the delay in talking to you. Waiting eagerly for you! With Regards, Roy.
Dear David, How are you doing? I am
really
happy and excited after receiving the photos of our recent trip to Europe. You know, from
extremely
long period I'm planning a trip to Europe
on the contrary
I could not
make
it due to the fact of numerous unforeseen circumstances. Then I
got
a letter Informing me to
join
you for the Europe excursion for two weeks. I was
really
excited at that moment and it
got
doubled when I reached Europe. The beauty of the place is beyond my imagination and it was great to
see
European architecture, Iceland and the landscape. The photos were
extremely
beautiful
and it's
really
difficult to
describe
my feelings with words.
The
journey was a dream
come
true moment for me and I will maintain and album with these photos and I'm much thankful for you for making it happen. By the way, I'm
consequently
sorry for not responding immediately after the visit. Since I took a long
leave
from office, I had numerous pending work at the office and I had back to back submissions. I already
told
you about the monsoon in Pune and how
beautiful
to go for a trek during those days.
Consequently
it would be great if you could
come
and stay with me during the coming rainy season in my place. I'm sorry for the delay in talking to you. Waiting
eagerly
for you! With Regards, Roy.
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IELTS letter Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

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  American English
1 paragraphs
240 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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