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Write a letter to your teachers to explain why you cannot continue at this time

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Dear Mr Ali I am writing to you regarding my attention to defer from the medical program at the International Medical School for two semesters. Currently, I am in the second year of the program and completed three semesters. Although I have passed all the exams with a good performance, I found that I can not continue the program. Last semester, I faced psychological health issues that made me unfocused to fulfil the program requirements, such as attendance and submission of the assignments. Therefore, I will start a special treatment program with a psychologist who is staying in a various city. In addition, I have been advised to move to Kuala Lumpur to receive medical management there. I know this decision will make you inconvenient, on the contrary I hope you understand my situation and accepting my request for deferment from this program for a calendar year. I am waiting for your kind approval. If you need additional information or evidence, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully Ramadan
Dear Mr Ali

I am writing to you regarding my attention to defer from the medical
program
at the International Medical School for two semesters.
Currently
, I am in the second year of the
program
and completed three semesters.

Although I have passed all the exams with a
good
performance, I found that I can not continue the
program
. Last semester, I faced psychological health issues that made me unfocused to fulfil the
program
requirements, such as attendance and submission of the assignments.
Therefore
, I will
start
a special treatment
program
with a psychologist who is staying in a various city.
In addition
, I have
been advised
to
move
to Kuala Lumpur to receive medical management there.

I know this decision will
make
you inconvenient,
on the contrary
I hope you understand my situation and accepting my request for deferment from this
program
for a calendar year.

I am waiting for your kind approval. If you need additional information or evidence,
please
do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours
faithfully


Ramadan
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your teachers to explain why you cannot continue at this time

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
170 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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