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A letter for advice to a friend about whether to go to college or try to get a job.

A letter for advice to a friend about whether to go to college or try to get a job. joppp
Hi Dave, How are you? I hope you and your family are doing great! I’m also fine and you’ll be happy to know that I recently completed my post-graduation. I miss coming to your house especially your younger brother who always shows his love to me whenever I visit you. I got your letter few days back where you were seeking my suggestion. As you’re trying to come to Canada for a better life and you already completed your post-graduation, you should try searching jobs rather than admitting to a college for a diploma degree. I trust you have already an advanced post-graduation degree in your study of field which is perfect to search a job here in Canada. For attending a college and being an international student, you need to pay extremely high tuition fees here in Canada which is unnecessary for you at this stage of life. Since you’ve enough qualifications and higher degree, it would be the best idea to seek for a job. Right now, I can think of few types of jobs e. g. junior network specialist, network administrator, It engineer which are really demanding and match to your study of field. I will catch you soon again. Take my love. All the best, Syed
Hi Dave,

How are you? I hope you and your family are doing great! I’m
also
fine and you’ll be happy to know that I recently completed my post-graduation.
I
miss coming to your
house
especially
your younger brother who always
shows
his
love
to me whenever I visit you.
I
got
your letter few days back where you were seeking my suggestion.

As you’re trying to
come
to Canada for a better life and you already completed your post-graduation, you should try searching jobs
rather
than admitting to a college for a diploma degree. I trust you have already an advanced post-graduation degree in your study of field which is perfect to search a job here in Canada.

For attending a college and being an international student, you need to pay
extremely
high tuition fees here in Canada which is unnecessary for you at this stage of life. Since you’ve
enough
qualifications and higher degree, it would be the best
idea
to seek for a job.

Right
now
, I can
think
of few types of jobs
e. g.
junior network specialist, network administrator, It
engineer
which are
really
demanding and match to your study of field.

I will catch you
soon
again. Take my
love
.

All the best,

Syed
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IELTS letter A letter for advice to a friend about whether to go to college or try to get a job.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
209 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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