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A letter for advice to a friend about whether to go to college or try to get a job.

A letter for advice to a friend about whether to go to college or try to get a job. joppp

Hi Dave, How are you? I hope you and your family are doing great! I’m also fine and you’ll be happy to know that I recently completed my post-graduation. I miss coming to your house especially your younger brother who always shows his love to me whenever I visit you. I got your letter few days back where you were seeking my suggestion. As you’re trying to come to Canada for a better life and you already completed your post-graduation, you should try searching jobs rather than admitting to a college for a diploma degree. I trust you have already an advanced post-graduation degree in your study of field which is perfect to search a job here in Canada. For attending a college and being an international student, you need to pay extremely high tuition fees here in Canada which is unnecessary for you at this stage of life. Since you’ve enough qualifications and higher degree, it would be the best idea to seek for a job. Right now, I can think of few types of jobs e. g. junior network specialist, network administrator, It engineer which are really demanding and match to your study of field. I will catch you soon again. Take my love. All the best, Syed

Hi Dave,

How are you? I hope you and your family are doing great! I’m also
 fine and you’ll be happy to know that I recently completed my post-graduation. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 miss coming to your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
especially
 your younger brother who always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 his This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to me whenever I visit you. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 your letter few days back where you were seeking my suggestion.

As you’re trying to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to Canada for a better life and you already completed your post-graduation, you should try searching jobs rather
 than admitting to a college for a diploma degree. I trust you have already an advanced post-graduation degree in your study of field which is perfect to search a job here in Canada.

For attending a college and being an international student, you need to pay extremely
 high tuition fees here in Canada which is unnecessary for you at this stage of life. Since you’ve This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 qualifications and higher degree, it would be the best This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 to seek for a job.

Right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 of few types of jobs There should be no space here: "e.g.".e.g.
e. g.
 junior network specialist, network administrator, It Did you mean "engineers"?engineers
engineer
 which are really
 demanding and match to your study of field.

I will catch you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 again. Take my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
.

All the best,

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