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write a paragape about the house where you live now

write a paragape about the house where you live now G9VRB
I live in a small house in the countryside with my family. I have lived here for 18 years from the time I was born until now. The small house is white, full of rooms such as living room, bedroom, kitchen, . . . In front of the house, there is also a small yard where I often play with the children, next to the garden. full of my mother's vegetables. The house is conveniently located near markets and schools. Around here, there are also friendly and funny neighbors. I like being in my room comfortably. Things I like decorating and arranging things the way I want. I also like the living room where my family often gathers to sit and chat happily. I love living in my house because it is small but it is comfortable and warm. I always feel happy in my house.
I
live
in a
small
house
in the countryside with my family. I have
lived
here for 18 years from the time I
was born
until
now
. The
small
house
is white, full of
rooms
such as living
room
, bedroom, kitchen
, .
.
.
In front of the
house
, there is
also
a
small
yard where I
often
play with the children,
next
to the garden.
full
of my mother's vegetables. The
house
is
conveniently
located near markets and schools. Around here, there are
also
friendly and
funny
neighbors. I like being in my
room
comfortably
. Things I like decorating and arranging things the way I want. I
also
like the living
room
where my family
often
gathers to sit and chat
happily
. I
love
living in my
house
because
it is
small
but
it is comfortable and warm.
I
always feel happy in my
house
.
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IELTS letter write a paragape about the house where you live now

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  American English
1 paragraphs
146 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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