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Dear Professor, As I am interested in your research areas. Unfortunately, I am having a hard time grasping information due to my limited knowledge of medical terms and concepts. However, I am interested to work in research areas of the spinal disc. I simply have no idea how to start. I would be very happy if you could guide me through it. Here is some information that could help you help me if you have some time. I possess a bachelor's degree in mechanical engineering. But I have some ideas in the medical field through my business in the medical sector. Thank you. Kind regards Junesh Gautam
Dear Professor,

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
I
am interested
in your research areas. Unfortunately, I am having a
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hard
time grasping information due to my limited knowledge of medical terms and concepts.
However
, I
am interested
to work in research areas of the spinal disc. I
simply
have no
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idea
how to
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start
. I would be
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very
happy if you could guide me through it.

Here is
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some
information that could
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help
you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me if you have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time. I possess a bachelor's degree in mechanical engineering.
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But
I have
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some
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ideas
in the medical field through my business in the medical sector.

Thank you.

Kind regards

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Junesh
Gautam
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your potential professor about the paper you are trying to read.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
106 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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