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Write a letter to your pen friend about: your last visit to a craft village.

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Dear Maryam, How are you? I hope you have a nice weekend. I have a nice trip to Bat Trang ceramic village with my family. Did you know this is one of the oldest craft villages in Hanoi capital with more than hundred years of history. Visiting the village pottery factory, I also introduced a piece of produce vases, warm cups or the carved plates with exquisite patterns. Through many different stages, artists in Bat Trang pottery village were able to create unique ceramic products. But you know that, I was impressed that I was able to make my own pottery here with the guidance of professional craftsmen. Best wish, Uyên
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Maryam
, How are you? I hope you have a nice weekend. I have a nice trip to Bat
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ceramic
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village
with my family. Did you know this is one of the oldest craft
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in Hanoi capital with more than
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hundred
years of history. Visiting the
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village
pottery factory, I
also
introduced a piece of produce vases, warm cups or the carved plates with exquisite patterns. Through
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many
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different
stages, artists in Bat
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pottery
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village
were able to create unique ceramic products.
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you know that, I
was impressed
that I was able to
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make
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pottery here with the guidance of professional craftsmen.
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wish,
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Uyên
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your pen friend about: your last visit to a craft village.

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1 paragraphs
110 words
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