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letter of invitation to an event

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On behalf of the music club of Danang University of Foreign Language Studies, I, as the secretary, would like to invite you to our singing competition. It would be our honor to have your presence as the judge of this contest. This competition will be held on November 20th to celebrate the National Teacher Day as well as to welcome the freshmen. The show starts at 6 pm so we would appreciate it if you can be there an hour earlier. As mentioned above, this contest will be a playground for first-year students. All the lecturers are also invited. Our music club will be joining with a special performance. You are more than welcomed to sing a song or have a talk with the audience, that is if you would want to. As it is a day to honor the teachers nationwide, please dress formally. Once again, we would love to have your presence but do not feel burdened if you cannot. Please indicate whether you will be able to attend before the end of next week (October 3rd). Yours sincerely, Pham Hoang Minh Tam.
On behalf of the music club of
Danang
University of Foreign Language Studies, I, as the secretary, would like to invite you to our singing competition. It would be our honor to have your presence as the judge of this contest.

This competition will
be held
on November 20th to celebrate the National Teacher Day
as well
as to welcome the freshmen. The
show
starts
at 6 pm
so
we would appreciate it if you can be there an hour earlier.

As mentioned above, this contest will be a playground for
first
-year students. All the lecturers are
also
invited. Our music club will be joining with a special performance. You are more than welcomed to sing a song or have a talk with the audience,
that is
if you would want to. As it is a day to honor the teachers nationwide,
please
dress
formally
.

Once again, we would
love
to have your presence
but
do not feel burdened if you cannot.
Please
indicate whether you will be able to attend
before
the
end
of
next
week (October 3rd).

Yours
sincerely
,

Pham
Hoang
Minh
Tam.
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IELTS letter letter of invitation to an event

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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