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letter of refusing an invitation

letter of refusing an invitation 5LQ0A
Dear Mrs. Pham Hoang Minh Tam I am writing this letter to Thank you for your recent invitation to the singing competition to celebrate the National Teacher Day and also welcome the freshmen It was very thoughtful of you to have invited me, and I would like to acknowledge the genuine efforts you have taken. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to attend to your competition as a judge of this contest. Due to the fact that I have another even to take part in at the same time. To be more specific, I am planning to celebrate a reunion event with my old classmates from high school and I accepted to be the host. Therefore, I couldn’t break my promise. In addition, I do not think that I am suitable for the role because I have no experience in that field. In my opinion, the person who in charge of the judge should be an expert in music. In fact, no one else but that person knows exactly who deserves the first prize at the contest. Thank you again for the invitation. I hope we will have the opportunity to meet in another event of your club. Your sincerely, Ong thi xuan mai
Dear Mrs.
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Pham
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Hoang
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Minh
Tam

I am writing this letter to Thank you for your recent invitation to the singing competition to celebrate the National Teacher Day and
also
welcome the freshmen It was
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very
thoughtful of you to have invited me, and I would like to acknowledge the genuine efforts you have taken.

Unfortunately, I won’t be able to attend to your competition as a judge of this contest. Due to the fact that I have another even to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in at the same time. To be more specific, I am planning to celebrate a reunion
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event
with my
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old
classmates from high school and I
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accepted
to be the host.
Therefore
, I couldn’t break my promise.

In addition
, I do not
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think
that I am suitable for the role
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because
I have no experience in that field. In my opinion, the person who in charge of the judge should be an expert in music.
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In
fact, no one else
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but
that person knows exactly who deserves the
first
prize at the contest.

Thank you again for the invitation. I hope we will have the opportunity to
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meet
in another
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event
of your club.

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Your
sincerely
,

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xuan
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mai
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IELTS letter letter of refusing an invitation

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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