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Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Neighbors, It has been brought to my attention that noise coming from my apartment is causing distress for you. To start with, I would like to thank you all for bringing this to my attention. I would take this letter to explain the reasons for recent noise. We've noticed one of the walls in our apartment has started deteriorating and needed immediate repairs. It involved tearing down and reconstructing it anew, hence the noise. Taking this as an opportunity to apologize for the inconvenience caused, I do regret keeping you uninformed about it. I want to highlight that the work will continue for a couple of days and apologize in advance. I've duly noted the complaints and remind the contractors to tone down the repair activities, consequently reducing further issues. Undertaking installation of noise absorbing screens is already on my priority list. I will take the worker's help to install them first thing before they start their work. Thank you for being patient. Yours Sincerely, Prakrit

Dear Neighbors,

It has been brought
 to my attention that noise coming from my apartment is causing distress for you.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 with, I would like to thank you all for bringing this to my attention. I would take this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 the reasons for recent noise. We've noticed one of the walls in our apartment has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 deteriorating and needed immediate repairs. It involved tearing down and reconstructing it anew, hence
 the noise.

Taking this as an opportunity to apologize for the inconvenience caused, I do regret keeping you uninformed about it. I want to highlight that the work will continue for a couple of days and apologize in advance.

I've duly
 noted the complaints and remind the contractors to tone down the repair activities, consequently
 reducing further
 issues. Undertaking installation of noise absorbing screens is already on my priority list. I will take the worker's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to install them first
 thing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 their work.

Thank you for being patient.

Yours Sincerely
,

Prakrit

IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

166 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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