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Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take V3pm
Dear Mr/Mrs Jonathan I hope this letter finds you well, I got your letter concerning the noise from my flat. My son James just got a drum set as a gift from his dad for his competition in school and he has been training so hard for it. I know he plays both day and night which is quiet disturbing. I send my sincere apologies for the noise it won’t repeat itself. He will be moving the drum sets to his friends place this weekend since it’s a soundproof house the noise will stop. Thank you for your patience and understanding Yours faithfully, Mrs jean
Dear Mr/Mrs Jonathan I hope this letter finds you well, I
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your letter concerning the noise from my flat. My son James
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a drum set as a gift from his dad for his competition in
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school and
he has been training
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for it. I know he plays both day and night which is quiet disturbing. I
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send
my sincere apologies for the noise it won’t repeat itself. He will be moving the drum sets to his friends place this weekend since it’s a soundproof
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house
the noise will
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stop
. Thank you for your patience and understanding Yours
faithfully
, Mrs
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jean

IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
104 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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