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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her RJKW
Dear Aidan, How are you? It's been so long since we spoke. I was over the moon when I received your letter. In response to your question, my belief is that enrolling in a university might not be the best option for you. Studying and pursuing theoretical knowledge was hardly your favorite. Also, the college offers limited escapades which apply to real work. Moreover, employers value previous experience much more than a degree. Hence, getting a job is a great opportunity to gain new skills and cultivate abilities. After all, meeting deadlines, managing time as well as learning to multitask will prepare you for the working industry. A call center agent would be a good position for a start. It's a demanding one, however, offers solid training as well as a multicultural environment within which you can grow. Well, there you are. I hope my suggestion helps a bit. Drop me a line to tell me what did you decide. Warm regards, Lily
Dear Aidan, How are you? It's been
so
long since we spoke. I was over the moon when I received your letter. In response to your question, my belief is that enrolling in a university might not be the best option for you. Studying and pursuing theoretical knowledge was hardly your favorite.
Also
, the college offers limited escapades which apply to real work.
Moreover
, employers value previous experience much more than a degree.

Hence
, getting a job is a great opportunity to gain new
skills
and cultivate abilities.
After all
, meeting deadlines, managing time
as well
as learning to multitask will prepare you for the working industry.

A call center agent would be a
good
position for a
start
. It's a demanding one,
however
, offers solid training
as well
as a multicultural environment within which you can grow.

Well, there you are. I hope my suggestion
helps
a bit. Drop me a line to
tell
me what did you decide.

Warm regards, Lily
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IELTS letter You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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