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You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take moeO

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in connection with my recent stay at Hotel heals on 20th Feb this month. Due, to heating system was not adequet my stay at your hotel was not pleasent. I checked in on 19th Feb as I had a meeting. I had specially booked room with additional heating facility as I was aware about the weather in London. When, I checked in to my room I found out that room temperature is fluctuating. Thus, I have called room service and asked to send technician to check heaters and they find out technical fault in heater and it will take 2-3 days to get it repaired. Therefore, I have asked to change my room, however they have denied as the hotel was fully booked. Unfortunately, I had to spent whole night in that room without heater wearing socks and drinking hot coffee. I had to catch a flight next day so I had no time to complain. I would like you to address my complain with apology letter. Also, provide refund of my money and provide free stay. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Nilam chauhan

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in connection with my recent stay at Hotel heals on 20th Feb this month. Did you mean to use the verb "do"?Do
Due
, to heating system was not Possible spelling mistake found.adequate
adequet
 my stay at your hotel was not Possible spelling mistake found.pleasantplea sent
pleasent
.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 in on 19th Feb as I had a meeting. I had specially
 booked You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 with additional heating facility as I was aware about the weather in London. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 in to my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 I found out that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 temperature is fluctuating. Thus
, I have called You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 service and asked to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 technician to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).heaters, and
heaters and
 they find out technical fault in heater and it will take 2-3 days to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it repaired. Therefore
, I have asked to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
, however
 they have denied as the hotel was fully
 booked. Unfortunately, I had to spent whole night in that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 without heater wearing socks and drinking hot coffee. I had to catch a flight next
 day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I had no time to complain.

I would like you to address my The word 'complain' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "complaint"?complaint
complain
 with apology letter. Also
, provide refund of my money and provide free stay.

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours Faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Ni lamNil am
Nilam
Possible spelling mistake found.Chauhan
chauhan