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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr Walker, and - Give your reason for writing - Tell about your education - Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job. Write at least 150 words.

You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr Walker, and - Give your reason for writing - Tell about your education - Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job. LPm1
Dear Mr Walker, I am writing to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager, which was advertised on the Student Affairs Office notice board on 2 September 2016. I believe that my qualifications, personal character and work experience make me a perfect candidate for this job. Currently, I am studying on M. B. A. program at the Loren Brusque University, graduating in 2017. I’m studying subjects that are relevant to the offered post. -* Moreover, I constantly perfect my management skills by taking various additional courses. During my studies, I have held the post of Junior Executive at Hansel's Corporation and improved my leadership skills, communication competences and ability to work in a team. 1/2 While leading and supervising subordinates, I gained valuable experience for the post of Quality Assurance Manager. I am available for interview at any time. You can contact me most easily by the mobile phone number given above. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the nearest future. Yours sincerely, Paul Carter.
Dear Mr Walker,

I am writing to apply for the
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post
of Quality Assurance Manager, which
was advertised
on the Student Affairs Office notice board on 2 September 2016. I believe that my qualifications, personal character and work experience
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make
me a perfect candidate for this job.

Currently
, I am studying on M. B. A. program at the Loren Brusque University, graduating in 2017. I’m studying subjects that are relevant to the offered
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post
.
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-
*
Moreover
, I
constantly
perfect my management
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skills
by taking various additional courses.

During my studies, I have held the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
post
of Junior Executive at Hansel's Corporation and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
my leadership
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
, communication competences and ability to work in a team.

1/2

While leading and supervising subordinates, I gained valuable experience for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
post
of Quality Assurance Manager. I am available for interview at any time. You can contact me most
easily
by the mobile phone number
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
above. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the nearest future.

Yours
sincerely
, Paul Carter.
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IELTS letter You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr Walker, and - Give your reason for writing - Tell about your education - Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

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175 words
6.5
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