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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr Walker, and - Give your reason for writing - Tell about your education - Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job. Write at least 150 words.

You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr Walker, and - Give your reason for writing - Tell about your education - Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job. 1q3L
Dear Mr Walker, I am John Doe, a student who is studying Business Administration in Loren Brusque University. I am writing to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager which was posted on the notice board. During the last summer period, I had been working in a local IT company as an intern. At that time, part of my works was to do the quality assurance of their applications. Before having the assurance test, some tools needed to be familiar with in order to complete those tests. Therefore, I already have some experience on how to do the assurance test. Furthermore, as I am student on Business Administration, I guess this will help on how to be a manager. Consequently, I think I am a suitable people to fulfill this post. I hope there will be a positive response from you. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, John Doe
Dear Mr Walker,

I am John Doe, a student who is studying Business Administration in Loren Brusque University. I am writing to apply for the post of Quality
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Assurance
Manager which
was posted
on the notice board.

During the last summer period, I had been working in a local IT
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company
as an intern. At that time, part of my works was to do the quality
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
assurance
of their applications.
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Before
having the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
assurance
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
,
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some
tools needed to be familiar with in order to complete those
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tests
.
Therefore
, I already have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
experience on how to do the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
assurance
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
.

Furthermore
, as I am student on Business Administration, I guess this will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
on how to be a manager.
Consequently
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
I am a suitable
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people
to fulfill this post.

I hope there will be a
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positive
response from you. I am looking forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

John Doe
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IELTS letter You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr Walker, and - Give your reason for writing - Tell about your education - Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

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6.5
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