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Write a letter to your managing director for transfer in head office Switzerland.

Write a letter to your managing director for transfer in head office Switzerland. GNdDg

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to apply for a temporary posting at Nestle head office in Switzerland. Currently, I am working as a production manager in Nestle, Head office, Karachi, Pakistan. I have extensive experience of ten years in the production line at different segments. In previous years, We have successfully launched many children cereal foods in the Pakistan market which are the flagship in the market share, but we are facing many limitations that we have to utilize pre-processed imported material in the production line. So, We cannot further diversify the bases up to the level as developed countries are doing in the output line. If I am allowed to upskill in state of the art production line head office, I would be able to set up a similar new plant in Pakistan and the company can improve its profit by reducing its import expenses and increase its production by utilising cheap labour available in Pakistan. My team is fully competent to handle the production line effectively in my absence. However, I will stay connected to them remotely as all of our company data is available to employees in cloud computing. Kindly, Approve my request for training in head office, so that my arrangements can be made timely and I don't face any hurdle in handing over the responsibilities to my team. looking forward to receiving a response earliest convenience. your's faithfully, Jack daniel

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to apply for a temporary posting at Nestle head You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 in Switzerland. Currently
, I am working as a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturemanagementconstructionmanufacturing
production
 manager in Nestle, Head You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
, Karachi, Pakistan. I have extensive experience of ten years in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturemanagementconstructionmanufacturing
production
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboundaryedgechannel
line
 at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 segments.

In previous years, We have successfully
 launched This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 children cereal foods in the Pakistan market which are the flagship in the market share, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we are facing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 limitations that we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 utilize Possible spelling mistake found.preprocessed
pre-processed
 imported material in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturemanagementconstructionmanufacturing
production
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboundaryedgechannel
line
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, We cannot further
 diversify the bases up to the level as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :developed nationscountries with a strong economyindustrialized nation
developed countries
 are doing in the output You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboundaryedgechannel
line
. If I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to upskill in Did you mean "state-of-the-art"?state-of-the-art
state of the art
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturemanagementconstructionmanufacturing
production
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboundaryedgechannel
line
 head You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
, I would be able to set up a similar new plant in Pakistan and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 its profit by reducing its import expenses and increase its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturemanagementconstructionmanufacturing
production
 by Do not mix variants of the same word ('utilise' and 'utilize') within a single text.utilising
utilising
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
Possible spelling mistake. 'labour' is British English.labor
labour
 available in Pakistan.

My team is fully
 competent to handle the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturemanagementconstructionmanufacturing
production
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboundaryedgechannel
line
effectively
 in my absence. However
, I will stay connected to them remotely
 as all of our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 data is available to employees in cloud computing.

Kindly, Approve my request for training in head You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that my arrangements can be made
 timely and I don't face any hurdle in handing over the responsibilities to my team.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLooking
looking
 forward to receiving a response A determiner is probably missing here: "the earliest".the earliest
earliest
 convenience.

Did you mean "your" or "yours"?youryours
your's
faithfully
,

Jack Possible spelling mistake found.DanielDanielsDanialDanielaDaniele
daniel