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In my informal letter for my friend

In my informal letter for my friend jRary
Dear my friend, I hope you're well. I am writing to ask for you help with a document that i need to have translated into French. As you know, i've been given the opportunity to spend a semester at a business school in Uzbekistan. Well, they've asked me to provide a translated copy of my degree certificate along with the original. Do you think you could do me a big favour and give me an hour or so of your time either tomorrow or wednesday, It shouldn't take you long to translated the certificate, and i can come to see you whenever suits you best. If you're able to help, just let me know when you'd like me to pop round. Speak soon Xurshida
Dear my friend, I hope you're well. I am writing to
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ask for
you
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help
with a document that
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
need to have translated into French. As you know,
Did you mean "I've"?
i've
been
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given
the opportunity to spend a semester at a business school in Uzbekistan. Well, they've asked me to provide a translated copy of my degree certificate along with the original. Do you
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think
you could do me a
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big
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
and give me an hour or
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so
of your time either tomorrow or
Possible spelling mistake found.
wednesday
, It shouldn't take you long
Did you mean "to translate"?
to translated
the certificate, and
Did you mean "I"?
i
can
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come
to
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see
you whenever suits you best. If you're able to
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help
,
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just
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let
me know when you'd like me to pop round. Speak
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soon
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Xurshida

IELTS letter In my informal letter for my friend

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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