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In my informal letter for Katy.

In my informal letter for Katy. XGLww
Informal letter. Dear Katy. How are you? I’m very well. I hope you’re fine. I do hope this letter will find you in good health and spirit. I’m very really glad to read about your letter. If you will come to my hometown I promise, we will travel around my native land. There are entertainment places in my hometowns. Such as AXSICENT and the back of the SYR river. Firstly, we will go to the AXSICENT. That’s why, you will learn about history of AXSICENT. Secondly, we will go to the back of the SYR river. And we will fish and cook them. In the afternoon we will travel around my hometown. There are numerous English schools in my village. And we will go this schools. Oh, another thing I wanted to mention my parents will wait you. They’re miss you. Just give me a call if you have any question left. I’ll hope you’ll come soon. Your friend Madina.
Informal letter.

Dear Katy.

How are you? I’m
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very
well. I hope you’re fine.
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I
do hope this letter will find you in
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good
health and spirit.
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I
’m
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very
really
glad to read about your letter. If you will
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come
to my hometown I promise, we will travel around my native land. There are entertainment places in my hometowns. Such as
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AXSICENT
and the back of the SYR river.
Firstly
, we will go to the
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AXSICENT
. That’s why, you will learn about history of
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AXSICENT
.
Secondly
, we will go to the back of the SYR river. And we will fish and cook them. In the afternoon we will travel around my hometown. There are numerous English schools in my village. And we will go this schools. Oh, another thing I wanted to mention my parents will wait you. They’re miss you.
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Just
give me a call if you have any question
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left
. I’ll hope you’ll
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come
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soon
.

Your friend
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Madina
.
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IELTS letter In my informal letter for Katy.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
160 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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